Hi,
so I've been obsessed with your story since I started it earlier this week. I read the first and I'm reading this one. I am sorry that I haven't reviewed. I'm not normally a reviewer so this is a compliment to you for getting me to log on and say that i love the story.

But this particularly chapter so far is the one that really reached out to my heart. A bit of me is confused over if I like Michelle and Micheal, because i do, but not better than her and Terry. But the part when terry goes in Michelle's bedroom and sees her lying in her wedding gown, Gosh...that was nice touch and i'm normally not the sentimental type. Your description of this whole tumor situation painted such a beautifully sad picture in my head, it was like i could feel the pain she felt when Micheal said she hasn't come to see him. But Shelley lying there in a white gown brought everything to a differnt level. Its those little details which has the most affect on readers. And I commend for it. Great writing and now I'll continue reading.

Hm, I always thought Terry had an American accent. He sounds similar to the Jamaican accent, that's cool. I remember in the It Rains in July when Michelle met his parents,she mentioned about how they spoke, that his mother I believe sounded American or the dad had a slight accent.So is it like a "pure" islander accent or does it have a slight mixture of other accents. I'm just curious. I like to have a mental image when I'm reading. Love your stories by the way.

this story makes absolutely no sense. your time periods shift constantly and are hard to follow. there are time lapses not accounted for and the last chapter does not fit with the rest of the story. i'm not even sure what the plot is.

Thanks for the information.

Hi I am loving the story and I know that a new story is to be started and I am requesting that you update the new story or I should say that you start the new story ASAP. Thanks

P.S. Good Luck with finals.

Take Care

so he didnt end up with michelle?

great update, but i don't undrestand the end, is michelle dead

Oh my gosh. This was an absolutely amazing chapter. I don't even know what else to say except that. You have left me speechless :)

You know, sexy isn't always attraction. Sexy is beautiful too. And to me, that scene was beautiful, even if it was filled with unattractive contents. And I was biting my lip the entire time it happened. Haha, i was nervous! Like. . . The the entire story would be screwed up if I didn't feel it was right. But it was :)

And the last line was perfect.

Um, um. What else?

"It always hurt me to know how dysfunctional I came off to other people. It was particularly hard when I knew I was trying so hard not to seem that way. 'Was I suffocating you?'"

I think that was my favourite line in this chapter. And you know, the chapter was strange. But I liked it, cause, well, I have a taste for strange, as long as it's not badly written. So I loved it.

So there isn't much to say about this chapter, mainly because everything is already said, and the stuff we don't know will have to wait to be figured out. Except maybe Terry's condition. Ha.


Can't wait for Drought,
Update so, Soon.
Love.

WHAT! WHAT?! I am so lost right now its not even funny O.o NO! THEY GOT BACK TOGETHER AND BROKE UP AGAIN! Why can't they just be happy! They both need counciling and Terry needs some Bipolar meds but still, but they CAN be happy...please tell me that the third part has a good ending because if it doesn't I wanna just pretend that I never read Part 2

WOW, I'm so behind, but any way... I can't believe he cheated on her!...well yeah i could since he was drunk, but still, that was a surprise. Also, How she couldn't see that he was so insecure about the situation? Because I know if the roles where reversed, she would have felt the same way. I'm getting so worked up over this, lol. So please update soon XD, i can't wait to see what happens.

wait a minute wait a minute SHE was the one who said that SHE would call him when she was ready SHE forgave him, and yet she was gonna marry Michael...okay right now im not even mad at Terry, I LOVE Terry im just ROYALLY ** at Michelle! she KNOWS that Terry has issues mentally (i kinda think hes bi-polar) and yet she treats him this way! i hate her right now >=(

Sorry I posted the review for the wrong chapter it was supposed to be 9 not 1. Thanks

Thanks for the update and I can understand why this would be difficult for you to write because it was difficult not to write myself in the story and slap the mess out of his whiny behind...All I kept thinking was dude grow the heck up you whiny bastard...YEESH...It's all about him. Here Michelle has this great opportunity and he is sabotaging her. I do understand that James family was ruthless in their not so suttle way of comparing their son to Terry. I know that Terry has mental health issues which makes even more unstable. So he cheated and they have been apart for so many years, wow but they still love each other. However, that did not give Terry the right to go off and sulk like a 3 year old, Plus he got drunk and had sex with some skank because Michelle didn't want to have sex in her friend parents home...WTH? I thought that was rude that he wanted to have sex with her for the first time in someone else's home as well. Thank goodness she had enough respect for her self to say no. Also, why were they assigned to the same room anyway?

Did Michelle ever have sex with anyone? Is she still a virgin waiting for the demented one...I know I am sorry calling Terry names now. He is so crazy that it is scary but at least he has been respectful of her wishes. I still don't get how she got engaged to Michael though. Also, she did become a great author so what happened to Jimmzzy?

Thanks for a great update and the other question that I have in the next story will we get Michelle's POV? Thanks again.

Uunhh. I feel sick.

You know, Michelle should have realized how Terry was feeling at James' house, since he is so insecure. But I loved her when she tried to help him. But it's a lost cause sometimes, 'cause he won't let her, and that's a really sad and ** up part of it, isn't it?

And the sense of urgency after he went to the bar, and how the scenes race by. Those were my favourite parts of the chapter.

And when Michelle came and forgave him, it made me cry. hehe. im a crybaby. But i hated, hated, how she didn't call him for years. I know why, but how can she do that? it was terrible. even though, i know she's justified, in a way.

Terry was going through a lot though, and he's so breakable. ugh. it makes me feel sick. makes you want to care for him. erm erm. oh, and well, sex is release for many people, and for Terry, a person who's had sex quite often. . . it's fitting for him. to do what he did, and to cope with it in that manner. and then sometimes i feel people look for more pain to ease their pain. i can't explain that, but that what i think.

um, um, anything else? oh, well, yes. i prefer the longer ones less often. but whatever makes you feel more comfortable, and is easier for you.

thank youz.
love.

update so, soon.