 That Random Girl Who Writes 2009-11-15 . chapter 15great job thus far! please write more. |
 That Random Girl Who Writes 2009-11-14 . chapter 1nice going. i'll finish later. |
 Sunsets on the East Side 2009-11-05 . chapter 15Damn, this is a good story. I've always been interested in the morals and the thoughts behind teen pregnancy, although I wouldn't personally support it. Keep it up!
-Liv |
 Piano Tie 2009-10-07 . chapter 15Awesome.
More, please??
Oh and try to add some more detail in the writing, would you? THANK!
P.T |
 Sierra .T. 2009-10-06 . chapter 15Hey. Im a writer to well obviously. My story will be up soon. Anyways, i think it would be great if Jamie didnt abort her baby, but let Lilly adopt itt, beecause Lilly is the one who really wants one. Great job so far! i really like it! |
 AmandaHold 2009-10-06 . chapter 15I don't agree with abortion either, but I think it was a good turn for the story. I think it's what Jamie would eventually do if she were a real person. I can't wait to read more. Update soon!
-Ashley |
 XoLuluoX 2009-10-05 . chapter 15:O She can't abort! I'm actually crying! I'm tough as year old bread lol. But no seriously I don't cry all that easily but I lost my baby just under 4 months ago now. Exactly 4 months in 17 days :/. So yeah its a tough subject for me but still she shouldn't abort... It won't fix things x |
 Alexandria After Death 2009-10-05 . chapter 14Well, took ya forever to update! It was definitely worth the wait, though. Update fast! |
 AmandaHold 2009-10-04 . chapter 14I'm so glad you updated! I think the idea of this story is really good. The whole point of them not thinking it through completely. I can't wait to read more. Update soon!
-Ashley |
 finish :D 2009-09-02 . chapter 13 PLEASE FINISH. HURRY.
I REALLY WANT TO FIND OUT THE REST.
:D I CANT WAIT. GOD, JUST UPDATE. |
 Crimson Glass 2009-08-18 . chapter 13Where's the birth?
You should start going by months instead of weeks.
I'd rly like to know how the birth goes.
Please make that scene as detailed as possible. |
 AmandaHold 2009-07-27 . chapter 13This is a very creative story and well written. I really like it. |
 before the stormx 2009-07-22 . chapter 13hey can i use this story in one of my series on youtube.. i dont know if you know how that works, but we could do it together. I make the youtube verison and you do this verison or if im aloud to make this on youtube i will credit u. Through the idea,the charcters EVERYTHING. But thats only if i am allowed. Rememeber all credit to you and this may promote your story,get back to me on that. OK?
either email me;
or give me ur answer through an authors note. Thank You .
--robin
a.k.a.
before the stormx
think it over
P.S. i love this story. |
 Lasagna Lad 2009-07-22 . chapter 13if derrick really cared he would give lilly another baby!
okay off of that rant
I love this story.
:) |
 Ashleighbabe 2009-07-08 . chapter 13I really lie this story so far! But lilly is really getting on y nerves. She purposly gets pregnant is fine with out her byfriend then has a misscarage which is sad but she is so millking it. And I would love if she got pergnant again but didnt know it and thats why she has put on weight. Continue please! |