great job thus far! please write more.

nice going. i'll finish later.

Damn, this is a good story. I've always been interested in the morals and the thoughts behind teen pregnancy, although I wouldn't personally support it. Keep it up!

-Liv

Awesome.
More, please??
Oh and try to add some more detail in the writing, would you? THANK!
P.T

Hey. Im a writer to well obviously. My story will be up soon. Anyways, i think it would be great if Jamie didnt abort her baby, but let Lilly adopt itt, beecause Lilly is the one who really wants one. Great job so far! i really like it!

I don't agree with abortion either, but I think it was a good turn for the story. I think it's what Jamie would eventually do if she were a real person. I can't wait to read more. Update soon!
-Ashley

:O She can't abort! I'm actually crying! I'm tough as year old bread lol. But no seriously I don't cry all that easily but I lost my baby just under 4 months ago now. Exactly 4 months in 17 days :/. So yeah its a tough subject for me but still she shouldn't abort... It won't fix things x

Well, took ya forever to update! It was definitely worth the wait, though. Update fast!

I'm so glad you updated! I think the idea of this story is really good. The whole point of them not thinking it through completely. I can't wait to read more. Update soon!
-Ashley

PLEASE FINISH. HURRY.
I REALLY WANT TO FIND OUT THE REST.
:D I CANT WAIT. GOD, JUST UPDATE.

Where's the birth?
You should start going by months instead of weeks.
I'd rly like to know how the birth goes.
Please make that scene as detailed as possible.

This is a very creative story and well written. I really like it.

hey can i use this story in one of my series on youtube.. i dont know if you know how that works, but we could do it together. I make the youtube verison and you do this verison or if im aloud to make this on youtube i will credit u. Through the idea,the charcters EVERYTHING. But thats only if i am allowed. Rememeber all credit to you and this may promote your story,get back to me on that. OK?

either email me;
or give me ur answer through an authors note. Thank You .
--robin
a.k.a.
before the stormx

think it over
P.S. i love this story.

if derrick really cared he would give lilly another baby!

okay off of that rant
I love this story.
:)

I really lie this story so far! But lilly is really getting on y nerves. She purposly gets pregnant is fine with out her byfriend then has a misscarage which is sad but she is so millking it. And I would love if she got pergnant again but didnt know it and thats why she has put on weight. Continue please!