i'm starting to like this much more than SWTE :)

There haven't been many stories over 100,0 words in length which I have committed to and read every single word but this one falls into that category. I can see why it inspires someone to donate their own bone marrow ^_^ Thank you, with all my heart.

Your stories and main man-meat characters complete my LIFE.

I was Born at Lennox Hill Hospital!! =D. *92 baby! - love your story so far. I just had to comment. TOODLES!~

You made me bawl! Yes I am so totally accusing you!
:) thanks, this story was... the coffee to my monday morning.

This gets better and better. First off, I LOVED these lines...

Sybil was obviously enjoying the blank stares. “I want to sleep with Cole!” She shouted. Everyone’s eyes turned to her now. “I want to sleep with everybody! Sleepover!” She banged her little fists against the table.

Absolutely ADORABLE!

Secondly, it's amazing how alien Joss is in this story. I didn't really like her at first in SWTE, but she grew on me immensely, to the point where I really felt for her. Now... being in Charlie's shoes, it almost seems like she's a totally different person. It's weird.

Loving this! Great job.

Just to let you know (though I'm sure someone has alerted you to this already), you can right click "colour" when it's underlined in red and choose to add it to your dictionary so it doesn't correct it anymore.

I love Cole. I'm so glad you continued with him. This is going pretty well so far, and I'm warming up to Charlie!

Okay, I know my reviews aren't very constructive, but I must say this: I KNEW you watched Sex and the City. Rofl. I noticed little things in the last story. I pick up on little details like that...

Love it. Anyway, love the story so far. But I still can't see him with someone other than Joss. Reading on!

WOW. I'm slow. You'd think the starbucks gift card, the green eyes, the dark hair, SOMETHING would tip me off that it was Cole, but I never saw Cole as a gross drunk guy, so I didn't expect it to be him...

I can't see him in love with anyone other than Joss.. :(

I'm excited to see what happens! *keeps reading*

Loved the first chapter.
Excited to read more!

So I stayed up till 5 in the morning reading this fiction. I was looking for something amazing, and well I stumbled over this C2, I do not normally look at these. Then I saw your story, started reading it and remembered your little character Sybil...
Then I thought


And thought


And thought

Guess what I realized... Bet you can guess. HA I read your fiction about Joss, Jack, Cole and all of your amazing characters. Then I think I lost the link because I didn't remember the ending.

I loved this story. It made me laugh out loud so many times. Sybil, the keys scene in the epilogue more like a prologue, and other random times.

I just have one thing to ask. Will you write my life. I think it would be fascinating!

I loved this story! WRITE MORE! Lolrotf, anyways, I loved every word of this story, I might even say that it was a bit better than SWTE. :) Maybe. Lolrotf, anyways, when you have time, check out my story, and reveiw!

Haii!
Oh my God, this story is amazing.
Totally love the characters.
You're brilliant!

this story was amazing and the epilogue was so cute.

this is the best story i've evr read on fictionpress! i love Cole and Charlie! i never liked Joss...i'm so glad Cole got his happy ending...and i loved Noah's story too...he is so cute with Addie and Sybil! but Cole takes the cake...he is all around sweetheart!