Wow, Penelope P such a well-written plot and excellently executed novel. You write far better than many romance-novelists on their best days that I've read. It stinks that my shift is ending now, but I just HAVE to tell you what an amazing author you are, such great characterization.

Keep writing,

Viola.

I just finished two of your stories in one day and I lovedd this one! I think what gets to me are the fight scenes. They're so charged with emotion and I'm always in tears cause I feel how the characters are hurting. It was great, thanks for posting!

Yay! Happy ending for Cole! I usually don't give stories with a character from another story a chance but I'm glad I did for this one! I absolutely adore all your characters!

You have no idea how much I laughed when Charlie named the squirrel Penny.

I thought this story was too cute. I like how Cole just coming and pushing into her life. Then, she eventually let him in. All those fights. Stupid Vincent. But, I really enjoyed this.

Fantastic follow up to the Joss story, loved it!

hahaha omg this is awesome. she's such a drama queen. about the whole house. hahaha. and then his comment on her doing his laundry. HILARIOUS

hahahaha omg they do such crazy things. pretending to have sex to piss off the neighbours? definitely the most original hilarious moment on this site.

i like how she has so much past yet manages to joke around in a manner that isnt unreal. some stories try to have complex characters whilst including humour but end up feeling a little mismatched. this one is done well :)

heeheehee cole is so cute... he's cheeky but also sorta shy at times. squee!

Okay I can die happy now.

I love your story so much, it hurts. I read this before SWTE but i love this one so much better. I'm glad Cole didn't end up with Joss 'cause Charlie and Cole are just...perfect. Sigh. I want a Cole. But, well, you know how they say it, 'All the good men are either taken, anime or gay.' Write more soon! Cheers!

Holy fuck you are so hilarious. The squirrel bit got me laughing so hard my cat woke up hissed at me.

your little note at the end made me literally laugh so hard i had to book shit to the washroom so i wouldnt wet myself

favourite chappy. bar none.