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Wow, I loved this. I love how you convey your message in such a short poem. The short lines also help bring the poem through, and just feel... right, I guess.

The only thing I'd change about it is "I am Glass" being centered - I almost missed it, and only saw it when I hit "Review this Story". I like how it's italicized though :)

Nice Work!

Me.

"Creating an invisible barrier between those I love." A lovely metaphor for the need to build a wall between yourself and someone else. :)

I like it:)Very descriptive.

Write on!