I don't know HOW I missed this one! Very nice work with all of the characters, you did a great show of telling readers that not all couples have their happy endings right away!

Loved it!

a good chapter- but with a few spelling\word mistakes to go back and edit

AWESOME. I feel like Steven pwning Jonathan to the moon and back shouldn't make me this giggly, but it does. Dunno why. So this is the end, is it? This time around, at least. I'm holding you to your promise of more. >;

i realli hope this isnt the end to this story bcuz its a realli big cliff hanger and id love 2 see where it goes hopefully u decide to start writing again because u ended it in a very cut off kinda way i think every1 reading it would feel tht it needs more to come to real nice clean end

i think you should just put a chapter up of each one and take a poll or sumthing. but anyways i was way behind on your story (3 chapters) but i just caught up today while taking a break form all of my catch up homework and needless to say its awesome and im looking forward to the party that will be thrown~

I really enjoy the story and cant wait to find out what happens when everyone meets keep up the good work ill be looking forward to updates

Only corrections for this chapter that I've found are in paragraph seven, where Seth is talking about making breakfast. You have two unnecessary commas, one in the second sentence (the first comma isn't needed), the second is in "When we’ve finished breakfast, we go into the living room." that sentence. Then again, that's just me being nit-picky. Other than that, as always, nicely done.

Overall, my only concern with this story is the amount of characters, it sometimes gets a little hard to keep track of who is who and would be especially difficult for people who didn't read Prodigal's - it's frustrating to not be able to keep all the details straight.

And they leave the bed! Shocker. I like Carly and Heath; it's almost like they deserve their own story.

Personally I think Baby Snatcher sounds the most interesting [fantasy freak], but the other two sound quite catching as well.

As always, you're awesome.

Just finished reading this story. Again. For the...mhm...sixth time I think. ._. Addicted? Hell yeah. Your writing style is so realistic that I feel like Seth and Steven really exist; the way you described their feelings and actions. A wonderful work.

Hahahah. Dude, Steven gained so much respect for that conversation.
"Steven pulls back and corrects Jonathan’s pronunciation." Hilarious. Really. I love you even more now.

I just realized that all in all, you have less reviews than chapters.

And I do take my part of the blame, but damn, that's sad! This story is one of those awesome pits no one knew existed. And I'm a bad, bad fan, not reviewing every chapter. I'm so sorry.

So.. yeah. Update?

i like the present but i think seth is kind of avoiding the topic of the rings. it seems like he is anyway~ nice chapter though

the llast line made me smile. at least he asked even though he already knew the answer. i love it though. as you already know.

More sex. Yay.

i heart this fic! can't wait for the next chapter :) keep up the good work