LMAO!
The begining was priceless, and I really like how you change POV through it all. It was cool to see Diane looked at through two different eyes, along with Marie (even though she was viewed as a stereotypical teenager by the others whatevs).
To get more reviews/readers, you might want to change up the summarie and add that in a quick authors note in the beginning, or not include it at all, just make it all seem like you made it up (cuz it's possible!).
Great short story and I'd like to see some more that you've written!