|Reviews for La Belle Dame Sans Merci|
| fictionalboyfriend 1/2/09 . chapter 1
Looks cool. I like the juxtaposition of the poet's flowery language and the knight's coarse determination to get completely drunk.
| Carus 1/2/09 . chapter 1
I love this so far, it's great! Such a good idea, I don't think I've seen it before.
And it will help me with revision, a bit of humour is always good :P
Fave bit: '“Why,” the knight stopped a moment, to clear his alcohol strewn thoughts, “why are you talking about squirrels?”'
Also I like the way you set it out, centered like a poem but told like a story.
| zellah 1/2/09 . chapter 1
this was great. Very funny and clever, origional idea too. i feel sorry for the poet, attemtping "poetic licence" with the cynical and intoxicated knight!