Wheewh, I just got done reading all the chapters. I LOVE this! Update soon, please?

I could have sworn that I have already reviewed this- anyhow gr8 work!
Xx(I am in mii English lesson :P)

Oh, I;m enjoying this. I'm always a sucker for two people pretending to be together when they're not.

They seemed to get on ok though, and Connor's desire to go their different ways afterwards seemed...odd?

Liked the interaction between Will and Pey. Espeacially the detective work.

Intriguing twist with the eyes as well.

An enjoyable read, and there’s the potential of good banter between Will and Peyton. That’s and interesting name, where did you come up with it?

Wow, that was a strong start. I felt like I'd been droped right into the story though, and I like it when that happens.

Interesting that she called a guy though.

And a chilling end as well. I'll be back to read more.

Oh wow, that was absolutely wonderfully written. I loved Conner, the way you made him witty and funny~
Narq.

I just bumped into this story and read it all the way through. It's really good, update soon.

cute! lol

OMG!! This is soo good! It's funny and it's great! I simply loved it!! This was just plain funny and enjoyable~
Narq.

When are you writing the 2nd part?

oh! I bet I know where she's seen those eyes before...yay! update soon!

Wow! She does now him WAAY too well! that was funny! Great wrok!
Narq.

SQUEE...I absolutly adore Will...he is so cute and he reminds me of some of my friends with the whole 'innocent-ness' then bang with some innuendo...anyway...I love Will and Peytons relationship it is...I know I say it a lot but...it's cute :D I can't wait for that big finale...:D and good luck editing stuff...:D

PS: Thanks for that cyber chocolate chip cookie...I'll save it for a rain day...but that won't be too good on my computer...oh well :D


Blithe smilE

That's OK, this was a nice chapter... I can't wait for the update!
Narq.