Wow, that was AWESOME! Really, really good. But . . . I'm the only one who knows you that has blue eyes . . . Hm . . . My favorite color isn't black. Anyway, I really liked your poem!

Really liked it. And I loved your profile intro. Very funny, very articulate. So you in comparison to a dying rodent doesn't quite make sense to me, ha, but whatever floats your boat I guess. Perhaps when rodents are dying is when they are most articulate.

Truly,

Twyla

i like it..good job..)

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