Aw, that was so cute! Great job

This is definitely one of my favourite of your stories... I liked how it was longer, and had a bit more plot. Also, in general with your stories I like them cause there's romance but not a lot of explicitness.

owh... this was so swet! and cute.
When i read it, it kinda made my heart twist inside, if you get what I mean...

Since you read my story, I figured I would check out yours - and I'm very glad I did! This is completely adorable. The boys are so sweet! And I really like how easily your dialogue flows. Terrific work!

Wow. This really made me smile. I was ungodly amused by Charlotte; she reminds me a disturbing amount of my own mother.
I also liked the description of how you could "fall in love with Ryan and not even know it". I thought that that whole section was very sweet.
I have to admit...I didn't really get the part with Katie and Chase. I don't know how to explain it, but it just didn't seem to fit.
Still, this was really cute. Good job!

oh yeah, thats definitely unrealistic right there hahahaha but i love it still. because the way you make them talk - it's like they're straight? haha :)

Aww... this was really cute~ I liked it!! unrealistic, maybe, but there's no harm in being cute and fluffy once in a while~
Narq.