|Reviews for When You're One Person|
| ArchetypeforaPilgrim 11/15/09 . chapter 1
I sense a but...
You have captured your thoughts and feelings very well, but I do sense an incompleteness to the picture. Just a sense.
You have a good understanding of the mind and dreams and are able to covey that very well throughout the first nine lines
| CostumeForAGutterball 1/8/09 . chapter 1
I love the subject matter. It's so pure, so real, so achingly vibrant. Brilliance at its best!
| Isca 1/3/09 . chapter 1
I think my heart broke. This poem is so incredibly moving and real.
"But being a fool isn’t as hard as knowing you’ve squandered a rare heart." THE PAIN! What a beautiful line, though. It's art, my friend. Glorious! This line is: "a cold and broken 'Hallelujah.'"
"The way I made you feel still makes you shake." A heart that is afraid of true love and all of its wonder. Now THERE'S an interesting idea!