Very descriptive. Great work.

"My bones are baby blue." The imagery here is strangely beautiful. On one hand, 'baby blue' could signify the coldness of death, and on the other hand, 'baby blue' signifies innocence and perfection. Very well done! :)

Oh that was really lovely and heartbreaking at once...it has this great Sylvia Plath-ish flow to it that I really liked.