Hi! So, first I want to apologize- I just got your request to beta this story today. Obviously you went ahead and posted it (its quite good :). I think first off, you were correct about there being a couple of grammatical errors. Maybe one or two in each paragraph- BUT I have to say this is actually a lot better than some stories I've seen from native English speakers, so you one upped them there. If you'd like me to go through and point out the exact mistakes, I don't mind doing that- but I'd rather PM them to you. Since this is a review, I'll just tell you that this is a lovely short story. The imagery is beautiful, and I think the opening and ending are gorgeous.

Sounded like something from a fairytale.
Really cool.

Que giro. O teatro era um bocadinho sombrio, mas giro xD
A mim é que não apanhavam nesse teatro. Já tenho tantos sonhos que até podia trabalhar nesse teatro xD

Elyon Somniare 2009-01-01 . chapter 1
Quando é que eu vou a esse teatro?
Está excelente, de onde tens andado a tirar todas essas ideias!??
Show must go on... ;P
Bjs^^
PS: Eu queria mesmo ir assistir ao Dream Makers ao vivo...