|Reviews for Innocent Seduction|
| Don't Poke Me 9/24/10 . chapter 1
"A well rounded critique is often the most rewarding gift a reader can give . Please use this golden opportunity to offer a well deserved praise and/or tips for improvement."
Deserved Praises: yay to Bold Text 8D
Tips: Stay away from Joseph.
| nul 1/3/09 . chapter 1
I really like this, and think the way you wrote it is wonderful.
But she, the girl, doesn't sound like a five year old.
And I doubt that a five year old would start to have "feelings" or stuff like that for any guy.
I just think you should make her older. ten-ish or something.
Other than that, this was intruiging to read.
The summary was very simple, and that's what reeled me in.
Martin the Waterskier
| Jade Lindsey 1/3/09 . chapter 1
This was executed so well it disturbed me. I want to think of this man as a Perv but he doesn't really do anything to her to make him so.. I just cant fathom someone having an intimate connection to someone so much younger with nothing in common. I think you should explore their characters more and write more!
| TwinkleHeart 1/3/09 . chapter 1
that was really touching (