Aww , it was a slightly sad ending , but I loved it . It was different . Kudos to you . Seriously , kudos .

It looked like a fairy tale on steroids.

Ahha , I love that line . As per usual , this was a brilliant chapter . It's sad that Gloom died , but I sort of knew what was going on .

I can't wait for the following book! The epilogue was great! I really enjoyed it!

Keep up the good work!

xox

the end...? WHAT!

like nothing happened.

This story was awesome! You may definatly want to think about getting it published! I'd buy it in a heart-beat! It was so well written and had JUST enough details so to get your setting yet not bore the reader. And the story was awesome! how did you come up with it? And how did you make the characters so deep?

:O That's not good...

Abso-luta-ly loved your story from start to finsih, bit of a dissapointment ending if i'm honest I was expecting fire works :( Looking forward to reading your the sequel and I wish you luck writing it x

I LOVE this story. I'm pretty obsessed with it and cannot wait for the sequel. The characters are amazing... I adore all of them. The emotion is definitely there; I laughed (a lot) and cried. Thank you so much for creating and sharing this wonderful piece of work with everyone.

This story was bloody amazing! The amount of detail you put into the characters was epic!

I can't believe I have to wait a year and a half to read the sequel! I can't wait for it. Ughh.

Hope you have a good time in Hungary!

And again, amazing story! Definitely one of the best I've ever read. Good job! :)

:O..YAY!

Goddamn, this is one awesome story.

Seriously, ever considered publishing? I would totally spend my (practically non-existant) cash on this. FO' SHIZ.

Anyways, SQUEL? I'm trembling with anticipation... metaphorically...

- Keep on truckin' and have fun with in Hungry and all that jazz, kay.

Violet was reading Dean Koontz. That's awesome. :)

But anyhow, another thing that's awesome...is this story. I loved it! And it's sad that I'll have to wait almost two years to see what happens to Armand, Violet, and perhaps Jane, but it'll be worth it.

And that's great that you do humanitarian work. I hope you do great in Hungary!

And it looks like I was right about what happened to Armand, though the poor Nightmare must be going through hell right now. (No pun intended to Alexander's powers) And I wonder just what kind of trouble he's in, and why he needs Violet's help, and why he visited Jane's instead of Violet's mind, and why he needs to ask Alexander through second person.

Oh, I almost can't wait a whole year and a half, but they say delayed gratification is always the best kind of gratification. Guess I'll have to wait and see.

I could go on, and on, and on, about the numerous details that I loved about this story, but I think it all sums up to the facts that your characters are very well rounded, your story is amazing, and your imaginative plot gives the audience a great time when they read your work.

Can't wait to read more, and keep up the great work wherever you go.

-G.C.L.

it was a bit rushed, but not in a terrible way, but seeing as there will be a sequel it's reasonable.

i like alexander's threats to give nightmares and drive any human boyfriend violet dates to asylum. he.

curious about the last chapter and armand's plea for help. interesting choice to have a POV swap, btw.

ah. well, have a wonderful and safe trip in hungary!

that's such a long time! but we'll all look forward to your return.

I can't believe you ended it like that! There are so many things that aren’t resolved! And Alexander’s and Violets relationship can’t end this way, they love each other!

But I understand why you did it. I hope you enjoy your stay in Hungary and would love to know more about what you will be doing there.

I’ll wait impatiently for the sequel!

I started reading this story yesterday. It is AMAZING. You did a really great job! I'm so glad there's going to be a sequel! XD