"my words were always wordless, weren’t?"... I think you mean meaningless, not wordless and also it should be weren't they

"deep down, I wished my “I love you” was true…"... Deep

"every thing" is actually everything

I like how its repetitious, but you're always saying something different. That was really great. I also liked the idea, it was interesting and very bittersweet.

"I just decided to start a journey without you,/and without you means… Just me,/I just decided to leave for real." Quite impowering words! In a relationship in which one feels traped, unwanted, and unloved one manages to find the streangh and of course the courage to say "I've had enough!" 'Tis a wonderful poem that most readers will easily identify with. Well done! I truely enjoyed this piece )

"When you watch the sky at night,

just watch me and I'll shine for you,

let me lead your way..."

Beautiful!

I really like it. well done, its great.

"My words were always wordless." Profound!

"It'll be a memory I won't cherish." I love the honest/sharp tone here!

A beautiful poem.

I like the line “I’m the smallest and brightless star

you wished on”. That is very poetic.