Didn't end how I expected it to. That's a good thing, in my eyes. Too many stories are too predictable.

This was a nice, light-hearted story.

That was a cute story. I love the italic words in between. Gave it a smooth flow. I loved it.

aw. very nice, i like it ^^

Aw, it was a cute little story. There were some spelling errors here and there, but all in all it was nicely written.

I liked it. ^_^