who was that to?! good use of Punctuation.
splendid.

Oh wow. I really really like this one. You can totally turn this into a song, seriously, permission to do so? =]

No really, this has got to be my favourite so far. The imigary was fantastic, and overall it was sensational.

Brilliant.

Sam
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Wow. Im speechless. Short, but effective - i envy you =]

I think its amazing - and it ryms too.

The cycle of it is very clever, nice idea =]

And the imigary is vivid -

I love this, i dont know why. I hate you. Your extremely good at free verse ^^

And i like the base line of this, it makes me smile - morbidly, and still i dont know why.

Sam
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Welcome Tues =D

And once again, i love it ^^