 SuzannaR 2009-03-21 . chapter 1Très joli, je peux imaginer ce moment heureux. L'imageries sont agréables avec le papillon argenté, si calme et magique.
J'aime la derniere ligne, c'est mignonne :)
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Je dois ecriter en englais aussi (pour le Marathon).
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Review Game Marathon, see link in profile.
I will write in english too.
This is very pretty, I can easily imagine the happy moment. I liked the imagery with the silvery butterfly sitting on your nose, it sounds very peaceful.
I liked the last line as well, it was sweet :) |