great chapter, i am looking forward to more, please update soon

I think that this is a wonderful story, with a great beginning.
I have been checking back often to see if there is any new development into a Ch. 5!
I can't wait to read the whole story from beginnging(again) to end.
My dear if you keep this up you will have a wonderful book, that even though I can read it online, I wouldn buy just to have it on my shelf and available to read 24/7!! Gotta do something when the power goes out!!
Good Luck & Can't wait until Ch. 5!!
~Love N.

ohh is she pregnant?
she has to be althoganting not really a sign is it
hmm ehh
anyways keep it up
and tsk tsk for the cliff hanger:P
i think u made a typo
when thomas says
“What does on in that fascinating mind of yours?”
i think it might have been goes but im not entirely sure

cant wait till the next chapter

Luelle

I did enjoy the three chapters
the were quite sweet
i am very interd in the reason why thomas is so willingly accepting his marrige althoguth i think there is a hint of love there? which i must admit wuld be great
and even thoguth itis sereotypical of the mother in law to be so evil i think its great and finally it is quite realistic in the feelings of the main character
for her to understnad the necesity of duty but i can see this wont be the classic story which i am quite happy about
i cant wait till the next update