i ve read all ur other work through 1ce and this 1 has just stayed in my head i luv it the end is the perfect finish i really luv it

( sorry 4 repetition)

West

Reminds me of 'du bist schön' by lafee - the word 'sacrifice' is really well-chosen. Disturbing imagery.. Very nicely done.

I think the most of people could relate since they always looking for perfection, even me I could know what this means, great poem.

Wow, bitter. Very dark-beautiful.

I know, it's horrible of me, but this actually made me laugh. Great work!

This is great! The last line works well... I like how you had the words "my sacrifice" at the very end. Good work :)