The balance you gave Andre is spectacular. Personally, I love reading about beautifully twisted characters. An enjoyable read altogether, the confusion is merely an additive to the story, I believe, since Andre is rather crazy. The confusion could be seen as a vibe given by his victims. Honestly, I'm not too confused about anything though.

I like the length, it isn't too long and doesn't disinterest me. Quite nice! I really like this story~! Good job!

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Whoa, this is really creepy. I'm strangely captivated by Andre, he knows he's mental and yet he doesn't really mind it. There are a few distracting typos, and I thought ingenue means 'innocent girl'??

The story is confusing, but it's good as it is. I might like to see this turns out to be a longer one-shot, though, as it'd give more background to the three of them. I think you have a really good thing going on, but there are too many alien things slipped into the story and that confuses me sometimes. (i.e: What is Death?)

The beggining kinda bizzare, the middle is good and creepy, but towards the end, everything's confusing again. Probably you should rewrite these scenes with 'Death's hand' and whatnot.

The story's strong point is the dialogue. I love how Andre somehow slips on some french, it makes him elegant and yet even more scary than he actually is. I lvoe the short but powerful decscription you have, and Andre is completely immensely crazy.

Thanks for sharing, and happy writing!

[ you ingenue] 'your'?

Pleasantly disturbing, S'Dust =)
As always, your descriptions are great, and add to your already spectacular writing.

Good job!!

~Cae, Roadhouse

Very nicely done! I love how calm and collected Andre is. It just makes him all the more psychotic and disturbed! The balance between beautiful and utterly chilling was amazing, and the length was perfect in my opinion.

-Core

Okay, this is disturbing.

The most disturbing thing I've read from you thus far.

And this surprises me why?

Honestly, this was good, Star. I cannot say just how or why, but the sick and twisted character you've made is just... just insane, and perfectly twisted. Good job!

I hope you'll be trying to one up yourself soon! XD

See ya!