a nice chapter.
the dialogue in this was great, which is very good seeing as it was the dialogue that was the majority of the chapter. it let show the different personalities of the fairies very well and i commend you.
the narration was fun to read too. the petty disruptions between the three fairies were very enjoyable.
there was one thing i saw that was odd though. i remeber that you used one word (i think it was "relatively")when it was supposed to be "relative". i cant rem where i saw it but im pretty sure that i did. that and i thinkone other error, but im not sure. thats it though.
overall very nicely done and interesting. you are a great writer. keep writing.

Your characters are amazing. You portrayed the three of them perfectly. I loved the description you used to describe them along with the dialogue and everything.

This was such a great chapter. Good job. :]
Update soon~

--Jessie my l o v e
p.s. pay it forward

I loved this.
The description was just beautiful, which allowed me to have a vivid image in my mind of what was going on.
I usually don't ready these kind of stories since they are often horribly written, but this is actually very promising.
I can't wait to see how you twist this into your own original story.

Good job. :]

--Jessie my l o v e
p.s. pay it forward

this...was...lovely. well done and i applaud you:)
i had refrained from reading stories these ever since i joined fictionpress, thinking, "what can a person possibly do to these fairytale stories? pshh, not much for sure." it turns out i was blissfully ignorant.
the narration in this story was fantastic. the story flowed really, really well and i found myself captivated by your interesting style of writing. lovely words were used to give you a clear picture in your head of the moods, scenery and appearances of people in the chapter. the wonderful descriptions and vocabulary used in this chapter also falls into this category. i thought it was very well done.
dialogue was also very, very good in this chapter. the words coming out of characters mouths were flowing and believable. nicely done.
i saw no spelling/grammar/punctuation errors in there, but you never know, i could have missed them. the only thing i really saw was that (i think) you forgot to put the fairy of the weather's title in caps. i dont know if it was intentional or not but thats all i saw. again, good.
i know i mentioned dialogue already, but i just remembered a little part that i really liked. the little speech given by the weather fairy had me really captivated, it was so well worded and lovely. i found myself smiling while i was reading without even knowing. i just thought youd like to know what your readers (well at least one, hehe) reactions were while reading the story.
lol, i am so happy that i didnt really have anything negative to say about this story. overall i thought it was really and truly excellent. i was (and still am) very impressed with this little piece. again, i commend you. keep writing.