I really like this story. I've been on Reagan's side from jump - maybe because you spent a lot more time on him, so I know the extent of his character a lot better than Richard. Please update soon, preferably before Christmas :). Being Jamaican, I love that the story is set in the islands.

Awesome chapter!

I appreciate the back story about Regan, but I feel that the chapter needed a little more content. It gave the reader something new, but it didn't do much to move the story along. I'm looking forward to something to turn this story, because the last few chapters have felt like fillers. I like the concept of the story, but it needs something significant to happen, because so far its just sort sitting in neutral.

My gosh, things are getting more complicated.

I like the adding of Regan first crush it gave us incite on why he is so shy around Rose. It did however kinda turn me off Richard.

I think Rose like Regan, but I don't think she realize what that feeling really is since right now she is in a relationship with Richard.

and this chapter has only strengthenmy opinion of Regan

cute chapter. i like that reagan and rose are loosening up around each other. nice development.

There are so many things that i have forgotten in this story, so i can't really comment on a lot, other than to say I like the story.

Things do seem to be moving slow, but i guess it's only realistic.


Oh btw, I don't know how Hindus might spell it where you live, but everywhere else, the Hindu goddess you mentioned is spelled "Lakshmi."

I've never heard of it the way you spelled it, and that's interesting. unless it's a typo. Ha.

Um, i guess that's it...
: )

update soon.
love.

I like the way you worked in more depth on the personalities of Rose and Reagan.

Okay so I hae read this from beginning to end and i'm truely enjoying it. I'm on the fence. although the age different is a bit much for me. I still am rooting for the pairing.

I believe that Regan have actual feeling for Rose at first I thought it was a big brother type thing, but now I see that t is more. I just haven't been able to get over the fact that Richard has a devious plan.

I was hoping that Max wasn't really gay that way she could get with him and end the mess. But if I had to choose one of the brothers I would have to say Regan. because they seem to have more in common.

Eep! i can't decide because they are both what i want in a man!

Dear Toonmili,

The story is really good and i can't wait till i knew the ending. I had some sleepless night thinking over the ending. So, please write the next chapter as soon as possible.
10q.

Regards,
Renusha ( Malaysia )

when will it be completed. I am rooting for Richard. I want him to fall hopelessly in love with her.

Love love love the new chapter! I think Reagan is just as sweet as ever and am rooting on him and Rose getting together. I think that she will mend his broken heart! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Thank you for updating. It was nice to see Reagen finally realzing how he felt about Rose. No offense, but this story needs some umph and it needs it soon, nothing epic, but something a little spicy.

I still like Reagan, but I respect your choice as an author for whoever you decide to put Rose with.

I'm still rooting for Reagan. I don't really know why. I like him more than Richard I guess. Richard is a good guy to but I just haven't been convinced that he is the right one for Rose.