Oh! What a horrible woman Silvia is using her like that. Great story I'll be waiting for your update.

OMG this is amazing! you have to keep writing!!??!

What?! That wasn't fair! I dont like Silvia!

Wow, well this is a very straight forward chapter! Its an interesting concept, but it might be interesting to reveal this info throughout the story instead of all in one place. I felt like I was just reading a longer version of your synopsis. Anyways, great idea and I'll try to read more soon!

-Frost

I'm gonna punch Silvia in the freaking mother 'effin face.

Update soon.

Your characters are INSANE.
I get Charlie has the excuse of being bipolar, but the rest of them do things for no rhyme or reason! They just DO stuff.
It would be a lot better read if you edited out the typos.
The story is rather shallow... it's got no depth.
If you think about it, Niki isn't the only slut in the story. Charlie was hired to seduce Logan and she didn't even think about it. She's sixteen and can drive and didn't think about getting a job, or anything. Someone pulls up, acts like a friendly idiot and even when they turn ice lady she still got in the car and left with her!

Gah. How typical of richies...Yes, it is poorly written, but hey, it's a rough draft, y'know?

Awesome chapter! Update soon!

But... I ju... Gah! NO MORE CHAPTERS?!?!?! GAH! Sacrelige! GR!

This is funny as hell. I think you could slow it down a bit, of course, but it's good!

AHahahahahahahahaHAHAHA!

Woah?
Wait a second,why'd Logan kiss her back?
This just keeps getting better and better!
Please continue it.
And,lol,Logan has a soft spot for crying girls?:P

What the heck...the shortest update ever! But its okay..that's something right? Well..update soon then!

This is an amazing story, i just wish the chapters could be a bit longer. Well please keep writing and update soon.