nicely ended ;)

he sounds like a fool.

epic.

love

this felt schizo.

jekyll and hyde hurts my mind.

Excellent, really raw and well, real! Regardless of this is from the heart or from a thought, it makes me feel that this person is real. The wording and flow, the stanza structure, just nice all around. keep at it,

Peace

it wasn't bad but it wasn't really good either honestly, it was in between..some parts were better than others