Wow, that's beautiful. I love all the words you choose that painted such stunning images in my mind.

Excellent work, keep it up.

I'd love opinions from a writer like you on some of my work, it'd really mean a lot!

love the first stanza and the last stanza the most. i love trains. beautiful descriptions =] gorgeous work

Frost's influence can be seen at least a little bit. I really enjoyed some of the lines and the voice of the poem as a whole.

Wow, I really liked that. You have a great style - the words you choose create amazing imagery. keep up the good work :)