SHIT your mind works in a WEIRD WAY BUT THAT WAS GOOD. really really good. you write well, i liked this a lot.

I LOVE YOUR STORY! It was so good! and I never expected for heather to be dead 0_0 or for calvin to die0_0 you are awesome!

-Y-

Short, but... no, not sweet. That would be a sick thought. It was good.

This is R.L. Stine worthy (I pray that doesn't insult you. I personally love his books). I mean, he was the king of plot twists in his stories. I was always amazing, chilled, dumbfounded when the twists came in.

That's how I felt after reading this.

0o0... Wow.

I'm sorry for the short reviews... it's half from shock (don't think it'll ever wear off), and half due to the short chapters.

I'm still in disbelief that they killed Calvin. The whole sickening scene turned my stomache.

Holy CRAP! O.O I was NOT... but he... how could anyone... are they mental?

Oh crap. I had to predict a plot twist.

It's almost as if she's having a nightmare, or is sick or something. And it seems a bit rushed, which is why the shock is hitting me pretty hard...

Knew he liked her... well actually, I'm fearing a plot twist when it comes to this. I'll just have to see..

Holy chapters!

... 39.5? In what degrees? In Faherenhiet, someone wouldn't be alive if they had that temp.

It's a little like how my mom sometimes treated my brother after my dad left (divorce). She has gottan better, and never was THAT bad, ut I find myself remembering it all the same.

Don't think that many people have a normal home life anymore.

And what a blow to poor Holly it'd be if Calvin did have a crush on Heather. But signs can be misread. Like a shy guy can avoid looking at a girl that he likes.

*nod* I don't always review stories at first, because I get nervous about it; I may like chapter one of a story, but am not sure about chapter two. Don't want to get stuck reviewing a story that just isn't my forte.

I wonder just how short this is going to be?

oh goodness i'm only the third review. can you post them anyways because i'm just so awesome that i have to count as at least four reviews. :) i liked the begining it sounds really interesting. i find it fasinating that twins can be so different when they look the same. any who.
peace love happiness

... *waves*.

This story sounds interesting thusfar. I'm anxious to find out why Holly got abused, and why she's not abused anymore. Also, where their father is during all of this.

It's funny (well, not really but... you know what I mean. I think). Not many stories portray abusive mothers- it's usually the fathers or stepfathers. A Child Called It was the first story I'd seen that had an abusive mother...

I'll be very happy if you end up uploading the rest. I'm sure you'll get those reviews.

I really like this so far! I can't wait to read more! Please update!!

~Lyn