Seriously my dear! Learn to write a synopsis! And a title for that matter! A horror called bubbling... yeh. So anyways...
I dont really have any idea what is happening... you need to cut through all the description and stuff and just get to WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON. i think this is your main thing in all your stories actually. When u are trying to describe something that is not real, you get carried away with comparisions and strange, outlandish descriptions. Stop. Remember that not everyone (as in no one) has your twisted mind then write in terms that i can understand :)

That was fantastic! I loved the whole of wanting to eat herself. I felt my mouth watering. LOL!

BP

Well, huh. That was interesting. You weren't doing anything illegal before you had that dream were you? Hey, not judging, just might go to explaining things a little.

holy crap...-steps away slowly- -looks online for numbers to physciatrists in england- -calls one for you- okay you have an appointment set up on the fourteenth at 10AM the adress is HAHA JK!
Yes, you do have a twisted mind, but i honestly think that we all do, if we just try hard enough :P
My advice for you: Don't do whatever it is you did before this dream took place. Never do it again, as it most likely caused this dream. My friend always has the strangest of dreams whenever she listens to the album Pretty. Odd to help her go to sleep, but only on the nights that she listens to it.
Okay well, um...disturbing story...and...yeah...-steps away slowly again-