omg way to make me cry other Iofiel and what she thinks she realizes, and freak out over the two thugs who come to steal Rebecca away and...eegad...

holy crap holy crap holy crap holy crap

EEK almost at the water fall chapter!! That was a fun and nice chapter! :D

haha Iffy makes me laugh sometimes...and rebecca's reaction to Iofiel made me laugh...
Meh I've got a lot of catching up to do, so I'm just gonna say that you've hooked me enough to not leave reviews at the time of reading...lol

dude that was intense...at first it isn't but then iofiel sees rebecca over the edge of the cliff and...goes down hill from there (no pun intended) (and not talking about quality, the light hearted ness of it)

Aw, I can't believe it :'( Luce loved Rebecca...

Sigh...

I like this chap, really brings the story together. Nice job. I'm really looking forward to the next one!

-LW

I really love this chapter. I think the way Iofiel and Rebecca are becoming great friends just adds another twist to the story. I love Rebecca and all but it would never work out between her and Luce. I mean he's an angel and someday he may be on his way back up there. If he doesn't though then he's gonna spend the rest of his life watching her slowly dieing. She's better off finding a human who can love her as much as her father does. Iofiel is holding it together pretty well I'm proud of her. I'm really excited I can't wait to see what happens I mean things were going fine untill the captors showed up now we're running around in distress. Still I LOVE the story. PLEASE update soon! =]
frizzle

“Lucky I have two angels to watch over me I guess,”

-LOL, nice line.

Cute! Aww, the thought of not having Luce is just sad but when you think about the fact that they could be good friends... Nah! I love Luce more ;p

OMG! I can't wait for the next one. Oh, seeing becca's captors must've really shaken her. O_O What's gonna happen next?

-LW

Hey, I posted my review in the wrong chapter! haha! It was supposed to be on this one. But hey, after reading the posted chaps, I'll just say it again, besides the minor spelling errors, it's all good!

I thoroughly enjoyed it!

-LW

Okay here goes...

The story has loads of potential. The plot is unique. (With that said, I expect an update ;P)

I would advise you though to use the Page breaks (_) instead of the ... It helps in the reading part.

I also don't mind the fast pace of the story.It gives room for more possibilities.

I have to say, when they proved to Rebecca that they were immortal, it made laugh. Poor Becky, I'm sure she was horrified.

I'm still for the IxL tandem though ^^ But Rebecca's fine.

By the way since I did a good deed by reviewing, will hair turn blond? haha, joking :)

I have a feeling that Reb might be the key to Luce's redemption. hmm... very intriguing.

And the last statement? Evil Iofiel >:) haha

keep up the good work!
-LW

Oh X( Out of the way Rebecca! Luce is Iffy's! Haha, sorry going gaga over here...

Iffy's really cute when she's jealous

OH! I love it so far.
Although I've noticed some minor spelling errors, the whole thing just masks them. I have the same probs anyway. :) I really like the setting and the descriptions. Their transition from Angel to Fallen is actually very cool. Thumbs up!
Off to the next chap!

-LW

I think this a great story. I'm guessing that somewhere down the line the plot will thicken in some way and I look forward to it. Write more please, I will be waiting in anticipation but patience is not a vertue which I possess. So I will have to suffer in silence, until you update again (which I hope will be soon).

Poor Rebecca. This would be a perfect time to slip away from the world, just disaeper from the world. Do what ever she wanted to, escape. Why can't Luce and Iffy just admit their feelings to each other? Awh...I LOVE this story! PLEASE update soon, PLEASE? =]
frizzle

M, nice chapter. I like the whole, 'Luce is extremely pleasant and cheery about killing himself'. I thought that was kind of funny. Oh, and I'm confused. I want Luce to end up with Rebecca, but at the same time, I want him with Iofiel. I don't understand! *wails*