Don't forget contrasting! You missed a wonderful opportunity to produce an A+ story. Russian today is different from China and U.S. With your background in both Chinese and American cultures, some comparisons would pull this paper out of averages. Oh, well ... there is always next time, and I look forward to it.

Not boring at all. You made a well-known city still interesting, I'd like to see your detailed description of its food though.

You have a lot of information in a short paper. You especially write about people, but not as in depth about places. I might pick up different people (artists, writers or thinkers) and landmarks to write about, but again Paris is full of history and interesting places that deserve a few books dedicated.

Keep writing. Good job!

Never been there, and cannot find out much more from your story. I wish you can explain why they wear green.