OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!Ekai, next time don't be such an idiot. It's okay tho, cuz u did the right thing by...anti-killing people? ANYway, don't die cuz if u die then i'll be sad. So don't die. LOL u guys rock! All o' y'all. rly. you make my day happy.
Will and Sis: O T P. u 2 were made for eachother. don't mess it up. ^-^ ur awesome!
Caeser: is the closet really just one big... space? i'll hafta look into that. take good care of Mookie. ^^
Allie and Zander: don't mess up *again*. be HAPPY! and don't worry, allie, i'm sure that ekai will be ok >_>
Liberis: i wish to get to know you better in the story! i'm sorry i don't have anything to rly say to u!
AUTHOR AND WRITER: HI U GUYZ ROXXORZ TTYL THRU GMAIL ^-^ ^-^ ^-^

Yay! FINALLY got time to read/review this.

I really like this; it's a very interesting read, once you get used to the jumps between POV, which was slightly confusing at first. Getting to know these characters is really super fun, and I've found myself on the edge of my seat more than once - especially during this last chapter!

Great job, guys. :D I can tell you're both having a lot of fun with this.

It's strange. And, by the end of the first chapter, I am totally confused. But, I'm awestruck. Oddly enough, I want to know who, exactly, Writer is. I want to know what happens next. How all of this comes together and whatnot.

It's really interesting and I'd like to congratulate you on creating a story unlike any I've read before. I'll definitely be coming back to read the rest when I have more time.

Oh, and your dialogue is amazing, by the way.

Kudos and good luck,
Steve :)