WOW Really nice continuation of the story. I loved it, thanks. Can't wait for the next part.
If ya need a beta let me know.

I have been totally captivated by your writing, please continue with this series as its amazing.

O my god wane is the nexts one for this coming out i have read the frist and this one all in one day great job... hope to see what the nexts one will have in it...

really good. Kitsunes are awesome, and Tobi seems cute.

Effing amazing! I really enjoyed reading both the main story and this Interlude. And I must say that I was deeply saddened by Zaven's death. And after reading this last bit, I was crying when she woke up after the fight with the naga. And after I read the translation to what he had said to her, I was bawling like a baby.

And I am looking forward to see what happens with her and Gabriel. It would be good to see that he forgives dear Kaida and possibly see them together. Don't get me wrong, I love Alastar but I think I love Gabriel more. To be honest, I love Zaven the most but... he's dead. I think I'm going to go cry some more. Really good. I'm in love with this series and I can't wait to read more.

Please do not stop this or anything. I and probably everyone else would be deeply upset. It's good when your readers are crying from the events in the story! Keep up the good work, Ms. Jadana! ^^

Awe... It's over? That's sad...

I wanted to see what happened with Alastar and her!!

Russian is such a cool language.. I want to learn it!

I still love Zaven next best to Alastar.

*Rain

I was wondering what happened to the symbol that she had on her wrist from before? Did the Vixen change it or did she add a different one? Also I think it is a very good idea to add this to the last story, although I would suggest you get an editor. Some of the words were misspelled although I am sure that is probably due to how confusing the English language is with it's word spellings. Anyway I look foreward to reading more from you, Keep up the great work :)

That little relationship between Kaida and Kiyoi is really interesting! Need update soon please! ^^

more plz

YAY! ^^ Love this chapter! Potential mate...? HA! I didnt expect that at all really. Update soon please!

Hey, when is the next chapter going up? I was doing some random searches one day and I came across your first book. I got hooked. Keep writing!

Awesome chappie! It was funny, and the marking change was interesting.

Keep up the great work.

Awesome chapter. I thought it was a little bit short, but that's the way it goes.

Awesome chappie!

I don't have much to say about this, sorry, but my brain is a little muddled as it's 8:30am here (Yeah, yeah...I know. Not much of an excuse. xD)

Keep up updating, eh?

well, I'm definitely interested. I am not sure how you would fit it in, but some humans handing out some kickassery in the human world would be nice.

I find it hard to believe that weres in the human world would be allowed by humans to lay claim to portions of a city with out a bunch of humans trying to kill them.