W-o-w. Amazing! I could feel the biting cold attacking my bare hands rubbing themselves together, and I could see my visible breath coming out in puffs and then disappearing into the wintry air. And then...Ah...

I could smell the chocolate, and the musky scent of rich wood from the clocks. I could even feel the hot chocolate on my tongue, warming my body from head-to-toe. Doesn't it feel amazing to have cold fingers wrapped around a steaming mug of hot chocolate?

Long story short...this was so descriptive and well-written! Excellent job, and I might add that I'm quite envious of the experience.

G.M. Tierney

Oh yum!! This stories description was amazing...just one thing. Chili hot chocolate? :)

Hello Laura

Very nicely written. Your descriptive language was very good. I could picture the store well. That occasion sounds fun, and I enjoyed reading your visit as much as you did enjoy visiting that shop.

A very charming story with good descriptions! I almost smelled the chocolate.
I like the word “chocoholic”. The store must be like paradise for you.