Yeah, I remember reading something like this about four years ago.

never heard about this story

but its good...Narcissus deserves it

hey cool stuff...liked it

but try expanding it with some conversation'en all

hey i really like greek mythologies...and dis story is good...i hav got a new set to add to my collection

the other version of it is also quiet gr8

keep writing

I'd never heard this myth before, and I love mythology. Thanks for putting it on here! It was written well, too.

This is the version I know (In answer to the FYI) and my favorite. However...well, I don't know. The writing just didn't seem...right...

Sorry I can't be more specific. It just doesn't ring true...