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Rachel 2009-01-14 . chapter 1
I'm not making fun of you, before you jump to that conclusion.
I was merely going to say that, because you were already terrified, the fact that you were also hyperventalating-sp?- could attribute to what happened.
-Not that I'm saying the paranormal doesn't exist, it's just that I know from experience that it's possible it was simply you hyperv. that caused it.-

With that said!
I think that it was a pretty decent story. There was one thing that I thought might make it better, though.
One I thought that you might want to expand it. It would be a little more clear that way.
Kalista Jia 2009-01-10 . chapter 1
aw that is so sweet of your friend.

Don't worry. I always imagine ghosts around me when I am in the bathroom. Why there? I dont know and I dont want to know. lol. Being imaginative is really scary!

Yeah, “You’re making me cry! I’m serious! When people cry, I cry too! So stop crying!” I do that too. Lol, once my friend cried and I cried with her too. oh well.

At least your fear is gone. Good luck though!
Tily Everly 2009-01-10 . chapter 1
-Shudders- Ouija boards . . .
I don't likee ghosts etc, it scares the bejeebus outta me.
Good use of personal experience though.
My friends wouldn't dare do that to me, they know how I would react.
=D
I have never seen (or wish to see) a Ouija board. Apparently they are illegal too . . . hm . . .
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