You can really feel all the emotion in this and I really like the rhyme scheme. I'm adding this to my favorites because I feel I can relate to it so much! Wonderfully written.

I really like this poem, it made me feel something inside, like little fire in me, haha, i remember things that happended me, thanks.

KKYYAA! i love it!..so deep! so cool! so romantic! love love love it!

aww... I really like this one too. though, there is one line that stuck out to me, "I need it, and I do not care", in my opinion, i don't think you need the second part in that line. but other than that, it's a fantastic poem.

you have talent! keep writing! :)

WHOA! thats amazing! i'm TOTALLY adding this to my favorites! wow, its so good! i wish i wrote it, haha. keep up the good work! :)

Beautifully rhymed and well written.

Write on!