excellent!! i love it seriously its really good. when you finish your other stories you should maybe think about making it into a proper long story.

Hahahahaha! I like it! It made me laugh and giggle and stuff...what a silly pair!

Oh God, I did not just think about having Ryan’s babies. Yuck.

Haha this line made ma laugh even harder...but now, now I must go get the laundry and put my makeup on and get ready for work...which I love...not...i detest it...it and it's greasy fries, and smelly beef...yes, detest...adieu my friend! Until I receive your next pm which will send me in a fit of girlish giggles hahahaha

Oh my god, a story with Priya AND Lex in it. What fun. Good stuff here :)

I can relate very well to this story, and it's written so nicely. Ha! Ha! Priya got that boy back good! Great work.

-Jae-

This is HILARIOUS! rofl

*sigh* I love these clichéd romances!
And I love Lex, he amuses me, and Priya for her douche monkey comment, lol.
Can't wait for the next chapter.

Haha, I stalked the whole conversation, and I love this story. In fact, I'm so tempted to make my own version.
Priya must be happy that she didn't actually ed up with Ryan, haha.
Good job!
I kind of love the sort of, but not really, inside jokes.

Bahaha, yes. Priya rocks. And this story makes me laughlaughlaugh.

Love it.

Kristen
(always yourKonstantine)

omg that was brilliant! ahaha i love how a lot of the convo from yesterday was stuck in their...lol at the little thing about their Indrish babies :)...very good...hopefully i'll get mine up soon :) if i stay motivated...great job..and lex in the girls bathroom was so funny!!

♥

OMG, I love this. Priya herself told me about the conversation, and she told me to read this in an e-mail, and I absolutely love it! I swear, I think you were channeling her or something. XD WUVWUVWUV! I agree with everyone - they'd have a gorgeous love/hate relationship and then they'd have AMAZINGLY gorgeous Indian/Irish babies! W00T! GO you for writing this, along with other authors! Oh, how I adore teasing my self-proclaimed online big sister. :D

-Kristy / toffeecakesxox. :)

W00tings! I am the awesome best friend! Thank you, thank you, it's so me it's unreal (although I haven't used a girl's bathroom. YET :P).

This is really well written, and you managed to shake up the cliché, which is great! Loved the direct quotes... they make me look like some sort of effeminate Yoda! XD

~Rawking on and out, Lexodus

Omg. That was the funnest conversation ever. I was in it for the whole eight hours it was up. Haha, that was so fun!

This was good...but why did you make them kiss and fall in love at the end :[

Hahahahaha, that was PERFECT, Pointy :) (I'm calling you Pointy from here on out, so you know.) It was so entertaining; I loved the lines you fit in there from the thread, too! XD What a riot. Very well done. :)

Oh god...I was dying of laughter...oh god. It was genius!! I especially loved the ending, how we DIDN'T end up together. Very nice. :)

Overall, great job. I loved the use of my quotes. Ratner though, rarely talks, and when he does, he's just...kind of rude. But I like this Ratner a whole lot more. And Jake isn't THAT considerate. :) All three of them go to another school on campus, so I never see them, except lunch and french. But wow..I love the insert of the French phrases.

The funniest thing was that I actually had a substitute named Ms. Stern as my French teacher for like a week last year..I almost had a heart attack when i read that. It's like you knew me!

AND YOU PUT LEX IN! That was so great..amazing. But seriously. Those direct quotes were very nice.

GREAT JOB!! Of course, one of my favorites. :)

Maybe I will show it to Ryan one day...especially the part where I kick him.:) Mwah ha ha ha hah...one day, he will get his comeuppance. Oh lord. It's late. That's why I'm using words like that, right? I hope. :)

AWESOME STORY!! :P