Aww, that's such a cruel ending!! But it's cute nonetheless. I really liked the last line; very clever.

-RiBow.

( Hey, it IS like RainBow... Never thought of that. But actually it's a mix of ribbon and bow together cos I had this weird thing with ribbons in my Sewing class. But RainBow sounds way better to describe it. :] )

Oh and YAY, a fellow Filipina!!

Ahahaha
Awe!

Cruel ending, but cute nonetheless.

Hey, now that ending was mean! >:( Ah well. Still "four years and counting." Maybe she'll be convinced to confess to him then. I don't think I've found any mistakes...or maybe I'm not a good grammar editor after all O.O!
--Leanne

AWW...hahha poor girl :P


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ive read this more than once, and every time i forget the ending and it shocks me. Good job!

Heyy!
I've read this before!! :O I can't believe I never reviewed before! Grr me!
Anyway, aww, I was soo loving that story and then that twist came into play. Normally I dont like the sad endings, but I LOVED the last line. '...four years and counting, right?' that was awesome, a great way to end the story. :D

HC
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PS And yeah, the story was for you, in a subtle way! :D

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i officially love this story alot and i did NOT see the whole dream thing coming!! lol

Wow, I have 2 things to say about this...

a. I absolutely love it! Its adorable and a nice twist of what usual stories are..

b. I'm pretty sure you invaded my mind and took my life.. Even down to the time amount! Weird...

But anyways, this is really great! Keep up the good work!

oh MAN, that would be so awkward. And just when you think it would all pay off, she wakes up. What an entertaining twist. I literally laughed in incredulity when I read the part with the alarm clock.

And I dunno. I like your first person, too. It puts you right into the MC's shoes, and her emotions are appropriate, so all's the easier. Good job. ^-^

'Til next,
CD 1.0

Oh my goodness! I loved the tense! I've never really read something in that tense. At least, not to my memory! It kinda makes me want to goof around with it! So inspiring!
And so cute.

Man, dreams like this stink.

I actually wrote a story similar to this, called Dreams, rofl.

But this was cute. I can relate...I've had a lot of dreams like this...

Good job.

oh. I was so not expecting that ending. Great job! :)

i absolutely adored this, you did a great job. i loved the twist at the end, too :D

That was so cute!! For a few minutes I thought it was a true story that YOU DIDN'T TELL ME ABOUT! So I was upset, for like half a second. But then the dream was over!! Aww...so cute though.

Him or Aspen? I would feel special, to be competing with her dog, if I was a guy.

Very clever last line.

NICE JOB LITTLE SIS!! :P