Leaves the reader wondering.
I love it.

The only thing is you start out with the format of please find me as it's own line, then you stop and then you go back and then stop and then go back. I think I would like it better if you kept it on its own line throughout the piece.

That said, the repetition worked really well. I also thought the piece was interesting and definitely made you think. I really liked the second to last line, that was a great similie.

"Please find yourself in an airport terminal." Wow! This line is so powerful!

I really like the repetition of "Please find yourself."

Wow. I'm not sure if I even understand it, but it grabbed me from the start. I like the way you keep repeating "please find yourself" , and there's always something interesting after it. Really great poem. ;)

I lovelovelove this. The last stanza is especially amazing.

Cheers,

Mutant King