This stuff always makes me look inside myself. Something we all need to do, but I need more than most.

Love you friend

This is extraordinary. I love the powerful emotion, with a rhyme scheme that just works. I may not have anything for you to look at,depending on when you read this. I just made this account.

Amazing. i love the imagry that you portrayed. it made the poem all the more personal and true. very well writen.

keep writing

-Danny

Good poem. I like the imagery and the repeated parts. Well done ;)

This channels such powerful emotion to surface, something we have all felt before, but takes on a personal meaning to any reader. This is brilliant.