   A Broken Heart Neva Heals 2009-11-21 . chapter 1aw |
 bookhugger 2009-07-07 . chapter 1Aww! It's so cute! :)
Wonderful one-shot. |
 SugarCraziiness 2009-07-04 . chapter 1Another very cute and sweet one-shot. A kiss at New Year's is so romantic!:D
--Leanne
I think that might be the last one for tonight. Gettin sleepy... |
 Sarah Ann 2009-06-03 . chapter 1 I love the story. It is so cute... You should definitely keep writing... I have read a lot of your other stories too, and I was wondering if you ever considered making them two-shots or continuous stories? I love it! Keep the stories coming! |
 ukrgrl 2009-04-04 . chapter 1lol it is cute :) |
 I Murder on Impulse 2009-03-25 . chapter 1Aw...so sweet!
xx |
 TuneOut 2009-02-02 . chapter 1I think this was a very sweet story. I like that Greg wanted their first kiss to be special and that their relationship was still so new and exciting.
My one criticism is that it didn't come across that Greg and Leigh were twenty five years old. From their dialogue, thoughts and actions, I would have thought that they were still in high school at least. |
 MusicLuver373 2009-01-14 . chapter 1aw i like this one too! but for some reason i like the other one more..A Simply Hard Response. that one is so CUTE! i love that one but i think one is awesome too lol i love the way its the kiss at the stroke of midnight. |
 madeleine friction 2009-01-13 . chapter 1I can't get enough of your short stories! they just make me happy :) don't stop writing them and I'm so not gonna stop reading them. well...until my iPod dies, but you know what I mean (: |
 Hopelessly Cliche 2009-01-12 . chapter 1Hey!
Late review, I know! But aw, that was probably one of the sweetest things you've written! That was so cute!
Aww, when she snuggled into him at the beginning, I was all sappy and gooey! That was soo adorable! Love it lots!
Great job chica! :D
HC
xx |
 CaveDwellers 2009-01-12 . chapter 1Wow. This was so... fluffy. It was adorable and so, so sweet, but at the same time it had a quality to it that wasn't very artificial or child like. It had a really nice feel to it. I liked it. =D
'Til next,
CD 1.0 |
 KariandTK 2009-01-12 . chapter 1aw. I thought that was really sweet. He kept it a secret? They hadn't kissed before when they were going out? |
 NattyAwesome 2009-01-11 . chapter 1I loved it! It was adorable and the idea was much more unique than most! Which is refreshing for sure!
And I love her name! |
 Garfieldfan 2009-01-11 . chapter 1*squeals* What a cute and loving story! xD |
 Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2009-01-11 . chapter 1Aww! That was supremely adorable my dear..they waited TWO months to kiss each other? That's such restrain, especially if you're 25! But like i said, j'adore my dear. Worth the wait!! :P |
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