 somnuswalks 2009-10-25 . chapter 8Shudders ran through me as I read this... It was just as good as the first of the ten tales of insanity... oh, and i didnt comment on the first seven because i have already on another, old account (aamori)... but i just didnt like how lucas was referred to as the "older male"... it seemed out of place... but overall fantastic |
 Aeipathetic 2009-10-24 . chapter 8 Oh crap. I /just/ realized that you updated.
And I'm glad that you did!
Wow. That was truly.. wow.
It was frighteningly delightful.
And again, I have to comment on how your endings are always just so /perfect/.
Thanks for writing about burying the dead. ;D |
 kitsune-mitsuki-fox-fullmoon 2009-10-24 . chapter 4Well, thats what you get when you don't give a kid enough goodies every day...
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You get a Pyromaniac! |
 kitsune-mitsuki-fox-fullmoon 2009-10-24 . chapter 3Does reviewing every chapter with my reviews annoy you? Just needed your opinion, but I probably will pay no heed to it, no offense. Nice ending. Lonliness really is a killer,
BANG! |
 kitsune-mitsuki-fox-fullmoon 2009-10-24 . chapter 2Wow. Never new little Sally would kill Jack. This one wasn't as scary as the first one, but enough to creep me out again... |
 kitsune-mitsuki-fox-fullmoon 2009-10-24 . chapter 1Jeez~!Now THAT was scary! Really, I'm reding this at 8:18 Pm and its winter/fall so its dark outside and this story SCARY! ooh...I feel chills...especially the sewing of the mouth...did you know I have a fear of porcelain dolls...ever since I watched Chuckie (Child's Play) as a little girl...ohh...the memories...But I have a question. Vincent is a guy, right? Well, okay. But the sewing of the mouth really creeped me o-o-o-out... |
 silent-anthem 2009-10-19 . chapter 4good chapter
silent-anthem |
 silent-anthem 2009-10-19 . chapter 1i usually don't say this but amazing story! i have never read anything like this, it has a great description and i love your choice of words.
silent-anthem |
 DelightfullyDemented 2009-07-22 . chapter 8Ugh, writers block sucks, huh?
Anway, suggestions... well, you've already covered pyromania, and that's one of my favorites, hm... you could always do something in the line of poisoning, but that can be boring. What could be interesting is if maybe the protagonist has some sort of deformity... I dunno, I'm not good at this stuff.
Anyway, I hope you over come the monstrosity that is writers block and update soon with a shiny new chapter for us all to read, enjoy, and shudder at.
~Abby |
 Brigit Potter-The Black Widow 2009-07-10 . chapter 4Creepy! I don't find it so believable though. Everyone could have run away from him before he set them on fire. Well written but unbelievable.
BP-BW |
 Aeipathetic 2009-07-03 . chapter 8I was really excited when I saw that you updated. That excitement deflated a little bit when I found out that it was an Author's Note. Nonetheless, I'm glad you haven't given up on this story and that you plan on finishing it.
Hmh.. ideas, ideas..
How about something along the line of being buried alive? That idea just fascinates me. I'm not exactly sure how you can go about with it, but I'm sure that if you do decide to use that, you'll cook up something amazing.
Good luck with your writing! :* |
 1MoonlightDrifter 2009-07-03 . chapter 8maybe like a love story of how two ppl met while being convicted to and Insane Asylum and then one of em can't help but think how their lover would look like if he killed her, so he does.
idk i have nothing right now. |
 I Am The Masquerade 2009-07-03 . chapter 3Though I didn't care much for this chapter, I love the ending line about killer loneliness. |
 MoonLiteDrifter 2009-05-01 . chapter 7i love ur stories they are great |
 Roxstar 2009-04-14 . chapter 7 I liked the imagery there at the end... but what I had a problem with was that you didn't specify a reason WHY he took a knife and started carving his arms and legs. maybe it was implied... but i didnt understand it at all... I understand the hear-stabbing part clearly though...
Its really good though, the way his thoughts are portrayed and everything... Really awesome.
Still loving your stories!! |