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Daiysis 2009-01-12 . chapter 1
I loved it =) I was about to procrastinate on writing the review but decided against it ^-^ Nice haiku
The Ghost Drowned 2009-01-12 . chapter 1
Precisely, and we all know that it's true. Nice summary.
rhymemaker 2009-01-12 . chapter 1
reminds me of me, great j...
Worldcrafter 2009-01-12 . chapter 1
Kudos; a magnificent story! Awe inspiring! Moving! Other compliment here! A sequel is a must!
Delta736 2009-01-12 . chapter 1
Haha! This is quite funny.
I'd say good job, but you know, its kinda 'half done'. ;)
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