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xdinoxcorex 2009-09-22 . chapter 15
Aw, that was adorable. Sebastian is a human afterall hahaha.
Sorry I didn't read and review earlier; the alert email got lost within the 90-something unread messages of the black hole I call my email account.
animebaby2000 2009-08-27 . chapter 15
thank you for updating ^^ i don't really have any constructive criticism or anything for you so i will just cheer you on and keep reading :D great job i really enjoy this story
Lemonzilla 2009-08-22 . chapter 15
Beautiful - there's no other word for it. It's not childish "everything's perfect" beauty either, but real beauty. Bittersweet.
So congratulations, you write beautifully :)
camikaza 2009-08-21 . chapter 15
...I begin to love Skye more and more, even knowing she'll die eventually...T^T Somehow I hope she won't but...it's beautiful, truly beautiful...
Dramatizer 2009-08-20 . chapter 15
Yesyesyesyesyesyes. I LOVE YOU SO MUCH.
zomgnessa 2009-08-20 . chapter 15
AW! Sebastian is being nice now :D I think it is so cute that they are helping Skye do the things on her list.
MAGICAL.NARRATOR. 2009-08-20 . chapter 15
This story seems like a painting to me. Everything is so visual that it's more like watching than reading. It's an excellent quality for a story to have, in my unprofessional opinion.

I've suspected Skye being sick for a while. I think you introduced it nicely.

wonderful chapter.
Rae Simmons 2009-08-20 . chapter 15
Aw.. That was amazing. Worth the wait, definately.

Even if the wait was excruciatingly long...
freakyfantasy 2009-07-29 . chapter 14
Beautfiul. Your story is simply beautiful. The way you portray every feeling and emotion, you can actually feel them. It's not slow moving, the pace seems just...right. I was disappointed when I ran out of chapters to read.

I'm anxious for the next chapter. :)
xdinoxcorex 2009-07-21 . chapter 14
Oh my god, I was just dying over how well written this whole chapter was. I hate you for writing so good. I'm indescribably jealous hahaha. Amazing work.
zomgnessa 2009-07-19 . chapter 14
Aww :D Sebastian and Dai should get together and adopt Skye. It would be the most perfect family ever. I want to know what happened to his dad though, you got me interested in that :P
camikaza 2009-07-16 . chapter 14
...O.o

Ok, I kind of guessed it some chapters ago that Skye must have cancer or something but...still...poor girl! Look what you're doing to her!
...
Ok, kidding, I love it how you describe this story! You really make me want to continue reading directly the next chapter, only to remember that said chapter isn't uploaded yet... ( no, I'm not guilt-tripping you...)

Still, I hope you'll update real soon!

Huggles!
MAGICAL.NARRATOR. 2009-07-16 . chapter 14
This chapter has a lot going on.
It was really well done.

I'd say more but i don't want to spew out my theories.

=]
xdinoxcorex 2009-07-12 . chapter 13
Went away?!!?!? What?!?! NO.
Lemonzilla 2009-07-07 . chapter 13
Wow... That was really... just wow.
I'm not gonna ramble on (though I could), but I do want to say really, thanks for the update, cause I've been going through some stuff, and it cheered me up like very little else can (though it wasnt a happy chapter).
So yeah. Thanks.
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