Awh! Haha, I love how big ofa dufus the main character was, he was so sweet it was funny. :D Really amazing job, I loved it very much, thank you for writing it!

ahrg that was too cute.

Hi!

Well I'm just passing through to tell you I really liked this one shot. I loved the way Nathan's thoughts were written.

Still, if a guy talked to me like that I'd seriously think he was a freak xD

It was a really cute story and it reminded me a lot of the year I spent in Winnipeg, Canada )we reached -50 celcius once)

It's also great to find an adult author on fictionpress (I mean a real adult, not 18 year old young adults :P)

Keep up the good work!

that was cute!
Loved it.
Keep up the good work!

aww sweet .
i love hiring a hooligan by the way. Favourite story on FP thus far.

Bhaha-haha.. sorry but Bimla’s Chutney ...haha *tears of laughter*
Anywhos~ awesome story ;) Very uncliche-like. T'was cute.
Everything I like in a oneshot... except that maybe that it was a oneshot. I guess it's like they say, 'all good things come to an end', and all that jazz.
keep it real,
x reeka

This story is so cute. And HELLZ YEAH! to the happy dance such and such. ;]

Loved your story! Are you Indian? coz you said you were hindu.
Just wondering, coz i am too :)

gahh!! your stuff is soo good
thank you for finishing 'Hiring a Hooligan' - it was one of the first stories i read on fp and i revisited it a couple of days ago and was happily surprised to find it finished (id thought youd given up on it) =]

anyhow, i hope you continue to write and i will check out Lucan's story soon (probably in the holidays cos reading is kinda distracting me from school..)
keep up the good work!

I don't have a clue how I missed this, but I'm so glad you're posting again! My sister just got married, so enough said there! Great job; this guy is beyond adorable; I want some one to ramble on and on to me like that!

You're like...mah hero? (I'd say heroine but it's totally boundless to be taken the wrong way.

*does HER happy dance for an hour now that you've FINALLY kicked yourself in the ** and started writing again*
I read a frigging ton but nothing I've found yet has compared to Hiring A Hooligan. It's about join for my all time favourite read with Anne of Green Gables.
Seriously, I will ... I dunno ... get your name tattooed on my butt if you finish that story. Something anyhow! You just gotta.

ANYHOW ... How the heck did you manage to make a guy who cusses and blinds every other sentence seem so darn adorable? Your geniosity continues to bamboozle me! I wanna read more (yeah I get it's a one shot but pfft). And find myself a baggy hoodie to wear.

Thank goodness you are still alive and brightening up tons of people's lives with that fantastical talent of yours. KEEP IT UP! PLEASE!

Right, I'm gonna shush now. BUT I WILL BE WATCHING YOU! IN A TOTALLY CREEPY STALKER WAY! ... SO YOU BETTER UPDATE or ... erm ... or ... NO MORE PIE FOR YOU! Capeche?

wot wot! canadian love!! i saw the title and i was like yes! someone who gets me! lol anyways, i love this because me and my friends have been known to pull out those sandals and skirts just when it hits freezing because we refuse to give into the cold. cute one shot, definitely a fave :)

Now I'm the one doing a happy dance! I just love cute little one-shots that make me all warm and fuzzy inside. You're one of the best writers I've ever seen (technically, that would be READ).

Ahh, sweet love. Thank you for creating this story.
...Of course Hiring A Hooligan would get in a hall of fame. Any hall of fame but baseball would love to have Hiring a Hooligan part of its ranks.
Thank you. For also making a new years resolution about Hiring a Hooligan... but resolutions...