  Marissa 2009-07-26 . chapter 5 WOW! Im really liking this. There's a few typo's through out the story so far,but besides that this is great! keep writing(: |
  sourgummyworms2007 2009-03-16 . chapter 4nice story. |
| angie 2009-02-26 . chapter 4 good story so far.update soon thanks |
| hiya 2009-02-26 . chapter 4 More!! |
| Zenia 2009-02-25 . chapter 3 You're not going to update are you? I give up.
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| Zenia 2009-02-15 . chapter 3 Update!! |
| Zenia 2009-02-05 . chapter 3 Update!! |
| hiya 2009-01-26 . chapter 3 More!! |
 Angel Yassy 2009-01-25 . chapter 3this is really good! can't wait for tha next chapter! update soon pleez! |
| Zenia 2009-01-25 . chapter 2 Update |
| hiya 2009-01-17 . chapter 2 More!! |
 Chit Chat Cat 2009-01-14 . chapter 2You know this is a very good story. It pains me to see there are not that many reviews. HM!!? I sent a review out to someone and they told me I was rude, so I will try not to offend, but I like the pace of your beginning and the way you want us to warm up to Ashton. I wonder if he began to blush when she asked was he 'sure'? Well I will look at your other story and make sure I put in a review. Keep it up and you get two thumbs and all toes up for this!! HEE!! HE!! |
| Chit Chat Cat 2009-01-12 . chapter 1 I like this. I have not read it before and so far the usage of first person is good. I see what the complications can be and already are and I hope you throw in even more drama. This is a good read and I hope to see your update soon. |
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