Hey! Good essay, I liked how it started off. It reminded me of the essays we read in class that are nines or eights, but we have to figure that out. Good job.

I think it's really important to know about cultural roots and this essay was great. I hope you get a high score and if you already know your score and it is high, good job! You deserved it.

Velvet.

Health patterns is one thing, but I guess everyone would be curious about where they came from and people related to them, relatives especially. It's often nice to look back to the past and wonder what happened to those before us.