I loved the way you weaved the more unusual vocabulary throughout - without it seeming like you used a thesaurus, or forced it in any way.
It was powerful, and the imagery in it was incredible. I really liked it - and your summary was very compelling.

Tremendous material. Just tremendous. However, I can see how being unable to format your poem the way you wanted could be frustrating. Still tremendous though.

Requiem,
First off, the summary: nothing short of amazing and so simple! It caught my attention and just demanded I read this piece. Nice job!
The vocabulary was nicely incorporated. Again, nice job.
The entire work was so great, I absolutely love your style! Not many people can write like that now a days ~tear~ I really loved this, and hope you can make more of it, and I'll look at your others, if you have some ;)
1-10 Rating:
9.4
Yours,
-CenturiesPast